中文原文
下午你在电脑上赶一份工作报告。写了大半的时候，电脑突然蓝屏，屏幕卡住不动。你有点慌，因为还没保存文件。等电脑自动重启之后，幸运的是文档有自动备份，大部分内容都还在。
My translation
This afternoon, I was writing a progress report on my computer. I’ve just finished almost half of it when the computer suddenly broke down and the screen was stuck there. I was a bit panic, because I hadn’t saved the document. Luckily, when the computer was restarted, the document was backed up automatically, so most of the contents were still there.
Revised version
This afternoon, I was working on a progress report on my laptop. I’d gotten through almost half of it when the computer suddenly crashed and the screen froze. I panicked a little because I hadn’t saved the file. Thankfully, after it restarted, the document had auto-saved, so most of my content was still there.
Key phrases
- crashed，蓝屏; break down通常指坏掉
- froze，屏幕卡住
- panicked，动词慌张
- it restarted，电脑重启，没有必要用被动