中文原文
你下班到家，发现宝宝睡着了。你轻手轻脚把包放下，打算先快速把晚饭简单收拾一下，结果厨房水槽里堆着昨天没洗的碗。你不想弄出响声吵醒宝宝，只能慢慢清洗。
My translation
When I got home from work, my baby had fallen asleep. I put down my bag quitely, then decided to make a simple dinner. I found water sink was full of unwashed bowls from yesterday. I didn’t want to make any noise to wake up the baby, so I had to clean slowly.
Revised version
When I got home from work, my baby was already asleep. I set my bag down quietly and decided to whip up a simple dinner. I saw the sink was piled up with dirty bowls from the night before. I didn’t want to make any noise and wake the baby, so I washed them carefully and quietly.
Key phrases
- be asleep，侧重睡着的状态
- set my bag down，放下包
- whip up a simple dinner，简单做顿饭
- the sink，一般不用water sink
- was piled up，堆了很多的样子
- wake the baby = wake up the babay，日常更用wake sb.
- carefully and quietly，表示轻手轻脚的洗碗，不能用slowly，太中译了