中文原文
下午你本来打算提前走一会儿，早点回家陪宝宝。收拾好东西跟主管打好招呼，结果临下班前收到一条紧急消息，有一份文档需要你简单核对一下，只能留下来多忙活二十分钟。
My translation
I’d planned to leave a bit earlier this afternoon to saty with my baby at home. I packed up my stuff and reported to my manager. Unfortunately, I got an urgent message just before leaving, which asked me to check a document. So I had to work for twenty more minutes.
Revised version
I’d planned to leave a bit eariler this afternoon so I could stay home with my baby. I gathered my things and told my manager I was heading out. Right before I left, though, I got an urgent message asking me to review a document. That meant I had to stay an extra 20 minutes.
Key phrases
- stay home with my baby
- gather my things，收拾好东西
- told my manager I was heading out，跟主管打好招呼的意义
- right before
- reivew a document
- stay an extra 20 min