中文原文
周末早上，你想烤几片吐司当早餐。你把面包放进烤面包机，定好时间。等烤好之后，你伸手去拿，不小心烫到了指尖。你马上打开冷水冲了一会儿。
My translation
On weekend morning, I wanted to have some toast for breakfast. I put the bread into the toast machine and set up the time. When it was ready, I was gonna take it out, but my fingers were burnt accidently. So I flushed my fingers with cold water right away.
Revised version
On a weekend morning, I felt like having toast for breakfast. I put a slice of bread in the toaster and set the timer. When it finished toasting, I reached in to take it out and accidentally burned my fingers. I immediately ran cold water over them.
Key phrases
- on a weekend morning，要加介词，要不就是on Saturday morning
- felt like doing，想做某事
- a slice of bread
- toaster，拷面包机
- set the timer，设定时间，set up一般指搭建设备/系统
- reached in to take it out，伸手去拿
- burned my fingers or my fingers got burned
- immediately
- ran cold water over them，用冷水冲洗