中文原文
你下班回家，发现家里的冰箱制冷效果变差了。里面放的牛奶已经有点不新鲜。你上网查了简单排查办法，打算今晚清理冰箱背后的灰尘看看能不能修好。
My translation
After I got home from work, I found the cooling effect of the refridge got worse. The milk in it was becoming a bit unfresh. I searched online tutorials for simple fixing ways. I planned to clean the dust at the back of the refridge to see whether it could go back to work.
Revised version
When I got home from work, I noticed the fridge wasn’t cooling properly. The milk inside had gone a bit off. I looked up some simple fixes online. I planned to clean the dust off the back of the fridge to see if it would work again.
Key phrases
- noticed
- wasn’t cooling properly，制冷效果变差=不能很好制冷
- had gone a bit off，形容牛奶有点变质
- simple fixes，名词短语，比simple fixing ways更简洁，表同样的意思
- clean the dust off