中文原文
午休的时候你去楼下咖啡店买咖啡。排队人很多，轮到你点单时，你发现忘记带钱包，还好手机可以扫码付款。
My translation
During lunch break, I went to buy coffee at the coffee shop downstairs. Many people were waiting in the line. By the time I could order, I found I forgot to bring my wallet. Luckily, I could use my phone for payment.
Revised version
During my lunch break, I headed down to the coffee shop downstairs to grab a coffee. There was a long line. When it was finally my turn to order, I realized I’d forgotten my wallet. Luckily, I could pay with my phone.
Key phrases
- grab a coffee
- there was a long line
- when it was finally my turn to order
- pay with my phone