中文原文
周末早上我计划去家附近的公园慢跑。出门前我装好水杯、耳机，换上运动服。出门后发现风很大，气温比预想低不少。我犹豫片刻，但还是决定继续。跑到一半，天空开始飘小雨。我只能停下脚步，转身快步回家。到家之后，鞋子和外套都被打湿了。
My translation
On the weekend morning, I was planning to jog at a nearby park. Before I left the home, I packed water bottle and earphones and put on the sports shirt. When I was outside, I found it was windy, and the temperature was quite lower than expected. I hesitated for a second, but I decided to continue the jogging. Halfway there, it started to rain slightly. I had to stop jogging, and turned back to the home. When I got home, my shoes and jacket were all wet.
Revised version
On a weekend morning, I planned to go jogging at a nearby park. Before I left home, I packed my water bottle and earphones, and put on my sportswear. Once outside, I found it was windy and the temperature was much lower than I had expected. I hesitated for moment but decided to keep jogging. Halfway through my run, it started to drizzle. I had to stop jogging and head back home. When I arrived, my shoes and jacket were soaked.
Key phrases
- On a weekend morning
- go jogging
- sportswear，运动服
- 语言要简练，能合并的句子要合起来
- halfway through my run
- head back home, 固定搭配不加to？ head back to the office
- drizzle，下毛毛雨
- be soaked，湿透