中文原文
周末早上，你打算出门去公园慢跑。你换上运动服，带上水杯和耳机。出门之后才发现外面风特别大，还很冷。你犹豫了一会儿，不想白跑一趟，还是继续往公园走。跑到一半，天开始下起小雨。你只能提前结束跑步，快步往家走
My translation
On the weekend morning, I’d planned to jogging at the park. I got my sports shirt dressed, and carried my water cup and earphones. After went out, I found it was windy and cold outside. I hesitated for a while, because I didn’t want to waste this time, so I continued for the park. At the halfway of jogging, it started to small rain, so I had to stop and head back home.
Revised version
On Saturday morning, I’d planned to go jogging in the park. I put on my workout clothes and grabbed my water bottle and headphones. After stepping outside, I realized it was really windy and cold. I hesitated for a moment, but I didn’t want to waste the trip, so I kept going toward the park. Halfway through the run, it started to rain slightly, I had to cut my run short and head home.
Key phrases
- go jogging
- put on the clothes
- workout clothes
- grab the bottle，日常高频动词
- step outside，走出门，常用搭配
- hesitated for a moment，犹豫了一小会
- keep going toward，继续往前走，toward用在这很合适
- halfway through the run，跑到一半
- started to rain slightly，开始下小雨
- cut the run short，提前结束跑步，cut sth. short 常用搭配