中文原文
你下班回家感觉很累。打算点一份外卖当晚饭。浏览外卖软件看了很久，纠结不知道吃什么，花了二十多分钟才最终选好下单
My translation
I was off work and when I got home, I felt worn out. I decided to order a takeout for dinner. I scrolled through the takeout app for quite a bit of time, but still struglling about what to eat. It took me nearly 20 minutes to settle down and order.
Revised version
I got home from work feeling worn out. I decided to order takeout for dinner. I scrolled through the takeout app for quite a while, yet I still struggled to figure out what I wanted to eat. It took me almost 20 minutes to finally make up my mind and place the order.
Key phrases
- got home from work，简洁明了
- takeout不可数名词
- yet/but后面要接句子
- make up my mind，下定决心
- place the order，下单