中文原文
周末你去超市采购。货架上很多商品在打折，你拿了不少东西。排队结账的时候队伍特别长，等结完账拎着大包小包走回家，胳膊都有点酸。
My translation
I went to shopping at the supermarket on the weekends. A lot of goods were on sale, so I put quiet a few into my cart. The waiting line for checking was very long. After checking, I headed back home with all bags of stuff, which made my legs sore.
Revised version
I went shopping at the supermarket on the weekend. Lots of items were on sale, so I put quite a few in my cart. The checkout line was really long. Once I’d checked out, I headed home carrying several heavey grocery bags, and my arms ended up sore.
Key phrases
- checkout line，排队结账的队伍
- grocery, 从超市买回去的东西可以这么讲