中文原文
你午休点了外卖，外卖比预计时间晚了很久送到。饭拿到手已经有点凉了，简单吃完之后，你只剩下很短的休息时间，很快就要回去继续工作
My translation
I ordered take-out food during the lunch break, but it took much longer time to be delivered than expected. The meal was a bit cold when I got it, then I had a quick lunch. After the meal, I only had very little time to have a rest, then I had to go back to work.
Revised version
I ordered takeout for my lunch break, but the delivery took a lot longer than I’d expected. My food was already slightly cold by the time I got it, so I ate quickly. After finishing my meal, I barely had any time for a break before I had to get back to work.
Key phrases
- takeout, 外卖
- for my lunch break, 比during the lunch break更自然
- delivery took a lot longer, 比it开头更简洁
- by the time I got it, 饭拿到手时，表示一个时间点，when有小小时间区间的意思？
- barely had any time，几乎没有时间，常用的副词短语
- get back to work, 固定搭配，不要用go back to work