中文原文
周末你想去图书馆复习备考。出门前你确认带上笔记本、笔还有复习资料。到了才发现图书馆座位几乎全满。你四处逛了一圈，好不容易才找到一个靠窗的空位。坐下之后你拿出东西，静下心开始学习
My translation
I planned to go to the library to review for examination. I brought my laptop, pens and review materials before leaving home. When I arrived the library, I found it was almost full. I walked around and finally found a seat by the window. I sat down, brought out my stuff and concentrated on studying.
Revised version
I’d planned to head to the library to review for an exam. I packed my laptop, pens and revision materials before leaving home. When I arrived at the library, it was nearly full. I wandered around and finally got a window-side seat. I sat donw, got out my things and focused on my studies.
Key phrases
- head to, 动身前往，比 go to更口语
- wander around, 四处走动逛逛
- window-side seat, 靠窗的座位