中文原文
下班回家之后，你打算简单收拾下房间。先把散落的衣服收好，擦拭桌面，再把垃圾扔掉。做完这些家务，房间看着整洁不少，你感觉心情也舒畅了。
My translation
After getting off work, I planed to clean up the room. I folded the messy clothes up first, wiped up the desk, then threw away the trash. After these housework, the room was neat and clean, and I was feeling better then.
Revised version
After work, I planned to tidy up my room. First, I folded up the scattered clothes and wiped down the desk, then threw out the rubbish. Once I’d finished all this housework, the room looked nice and neat, and I felt a lot better.
Key phrases
- tidy up my room：收拾房间（日常最常用，优于 clean up）
- scattered clothes：散落的衣服，比 messy clothes 更贴合场景
- wipe down the desk：擦拭桌面（除尘擦灰的固定搭配）
- throw out the rubbish/trash：扔掉垃圾
- nice and neat：干干净净、整整齐齐，口语高频表达
- felt a lot better：心情舒畅、感觉好多了